– the first two sections are good.
– the third section (CCTV security Issues) we need it as a points and more info in each point from at least 2 references, and the (preconfigured password) part will be as a part of these issues.
– the fourth we need to make it as table and add more info as needed in the table like (Access controls (how many and what is it)for each brand).
– after that we will have a result of our research that we have problem and a gab (that we found that for example 80% from the devices come with default passwords.) and also that we cannot change the passwords.
– the fifth section it will be the reason of why cannot change the passwords (maybe there is no way to change or there is no rule in the policy that tell the user to change it or because there is no awareness on people.
– last section we will talk about awareness on people and enhance this about changing the password and so on.